Hello and welcome to the 28th annual Florida Christian Writers Conference.

 

You may be asking yourself, "What's so special about FCWC?" That's a question with an easy answer.

1. We are bringing in one of the best-known, most beloved names in our industry as our keynote speaker. Robert Benson has spent his life writing and speaking about one thing: paying attention for the things in our everyday lives that point us to the presence of the Holy in our lives. About our practice and ritual and work and contemplation and the way such things can be reminders of who we are and who we are to become.*

2. We feature two pre-conference classes worth their weight in gold: 1) Book Proposal Studio (walk in with an idea, walk out with a book proposal), and 2) Book Pitch Workshop (walk in with an idea, walk out with a pitch for the writers and editors you'll meet over the next few days).

3. We bring in the top names in publishing--agents, editors, freelance writers, marketing geniuses, website designers ... just to name a few.

4. This year we will offer a writing/critique workshop that runs simultaneously to the conference. Conferees can choose by pre-registration to attend an intense time of working specifically on your work with trained critique experts from the Word Weavers International community. These sessions run during the blocks of time set for continuing classes. Afternoons are free to write, to attend workshops, to meet with agents, editors, etc. 

5. Finally, this year, like every year is guaranteed to feed your spirit, your craft, your relationships within a special communityof writers, and your need for fun! Our theme is Dancing on the Head of a Pen ... and to that end, we'll kick off on Wednesday night with a sock hop.

We look forward to either meeting you for the first time or seeing you again!
Eva Marie Everson
Mark Hancock
Directors, FCWC

*Taken from: http://books.upperroom.org/book-author/robert-benson/
 

Newest Blog

For Want of a Hook
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Dan Walsh

 

By, Dan Walsh, FCWC Faculty Member

 

Whether you're writing under contract to a traditional publisher, as an indie or as a hybrid, there's one thing that will always be relevant and always matter -- Are you able to write books people really want to read?

I've started to read several novels recently, only to put them down (for good) 4-5 chapters later. That's one of the odd side-effects to being able to buy all these ebooks now temporarily marked down to $1.99 or 99 cents...I don't feel any compulsion to finish them if they don't grab me fairly soon.

I've taken some time to study the main flaw all these duds have in common (well, I've already said it, haven't I)? They don't grab me. They fail to suck me in and keep me turning the pages. I want a book that demands I pay attention to what it has to say, that keeps me so interested I don't want to stop. A book that at least tempts me to change my plans (and keep reading).

Sometimes--and I'm being serious here--I think the difference between books like that and the books I stop reading might just be this -- the lack of a good, solid hook. It's clear to me, these writers don't get how important it is to learn the skill of ending every chapter (if not every scene) with a great hook. 

I'm calling it a skill, because it is something we have to learn, something we must be committed to in our writing. It doesn't come easy to many of us because writers are all about explaining things. That's what we're good at. We explain what the reader should be seeing in a scene. We explain what our characters are saying, how they're saying it, what they're thinking and feeling (or at least we should). We want the reader to get what we're trying to say. We want them to get it all.

And that's the problem. That's how too many of us end our chapters. Explaining too much, giving too much away. We need to end our chapters abruptly. We need the reader to feel frustrated at where we've ended the scene. We need them to insist we keep going and finish what we've started.

And we will. But not here. Not at the end of the chapter. 

To find out more, they must turn the page. They must stay up a little longer. They must feel the need to silence their better judgment and keep reading. 

My goal is to end every chapter this way. To end every chapter with a solid hook (except the last one, of course). Here are some samples of how I've ended some of the early chapters in my newest suspense novel, When Night Comes

Chapter 1 - To set this up a little, Sgt. Joe Boyd shows up on the scene, an apartment building. A dead body has been reported, likely a college student. It's a small town. They haven't had a murder in years. Boyd's been a cop in Pittsburgh. He's seen over a hundred murders. The cops who've already seen the dead college kid are acting all freaked out. Here's the last paragraph (catch the hook):

 

Homicide or not, they definitely had a dead body in that bed. There was no mistaking that familiar smell. Boyd had never understood why people described it as sickening-sweet. Nothing sweet about it. He guessed by its intensity the boy probably died late last night, or in the early evening. He walked to the bed and looked down at the body, then at the kid’s face.

Yeah, that’s weird.


The chapter ends (do you want to keep reading?)


Chapter 4 - We're introduced to a shadowy character named Nigel Avery. We don't know why, but he's following a college professor at the same school the dead kid attended. 
 

At the moment, his orders were simple: tail a certain professor named Thornton and build a file on his schedule, habits, and close relationships. But he had a feeling his other skills might be called upon very soon. He’d already concluded Thornton had little in the way of a social life. No romantic connections. He was highly regarded by students on campus. Kind. Considerate. The smartest professor at the school some had said. Apparently not smart enough, Avery thought, walking now about fifty yards behind the professor toward the Murray Building. 

Else I wouldn’t be here numbering your days.
 

The chapter ends (do you want to keep reading?). 


I hope you do. In fact, the #1 comment I've received from Amazon customer reviews for When Night Comes is: "I couldn't put the book down." I'm telling you...I think one of the biggest reasons for this is what I'm talking about here. Write the hook. Commit to the hook. Do it with every chapter (except the end). I try to do this even with my Nicholas-Sparks-type novels, not just my suspense books. 

Your turn: What are some of the better hooks you've written, or that you've recently read?

 

Dan Walsh is the bestselling author of 15 novels including The Unfinished Gift, The Discovery and When Night Comes. He has won 3 Carol Awards (finalist 6 times), 3 Selah Awards and 3 of his books have been finalists for RT Review’s Inspirational Book of the Year. A member of American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW) and Word Weavers International, Dan writes fulltime in the Daytona Beach area. He and his wife Cindi have been married 39 years. You can find out more about his books or follow him on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads or Pinterest from his website, www.danwalshbooks.com.